what i want my story to showcase is that as long as you keep trying you can get what you want without being a little brat but keeping a good attitude. i also want it to showcase the fact that moneys not everything and that you have no one to blame for whats wrong with you.
something that i want to try to put in then story is that Petersen's second wife has a baby while they are still married but it really isn't Petersen's kid, but he will never find that out, and i also what t change it to where Petersen's first wife and Third wife are cousins, so it will add some drama to the story line
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Drama makes a story more interesting, in my opinion. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteDrama definitely makes the story more interesting! i like how you are trying to put multiple meanings in there Your story will be very educational.
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